Quentin is much more educated than Benjy, I mean he is attending Harvard, so he provides better syntax in his narration. But his storytelling is all over the place. His stream-of-consciousness style is quite hard to follow and he uses the flashback literary device similar to Benjy but refers back to the same ideas. This style threw me off a little just as the Benjy chapter did. He recalls all these memories,
The narration suggests a lot about Quentin’s mental state. He seems quite scattered and unsure of himself all the time. Everything he tries to do fails. He tries to protect Caddy from bad men and even tells his father he had incest with her. But everything he tries to do doesn’t have any success. As the chapter progresses, he seems more and more suicidal, and as it was spoiled for me by my very own teacher, Mrs. Oles, Quentin does eventually commit suicide. However, it is quite apparent in the chapter without the spoilers. He stares off a bridge into the water, sees his shadow, and wishes he could find a way to drown it. If that isn’t evidence enough that he does not want to live anymore, I don’t know what is.
On to the next chapter for Boomdaddy. Wish me luck!
So firstly, "boomdaddy", I'm wondering how you think protecting Caddy is done by telling their father that they had incest? If you could elaborate on that, that'd be great. And secondly, why do you think Faulkner had Quentin told is story the day after he committed suicide?
ReplyDeleteWell 'boomdaddy', I enjoyed the personal touch and opinions you added to your blog. I agree that it was just as difficult to read due to the stream-of consciousness, but the improved syntax made the chapter slightly easier to follow. I can't wait to read more from 'boomdaddy'... though the name is a bit freaky
ReplyDeleteDid you finish the last sentence of the second paragraph, its seems like you were trying to say more there. Anyway, great analysis, I just wish you had touched more on the effect that time had on Jason and what led him to his suicide, and why Faulkner would have included this.
ReplyDeleteI think Quentin's mental state is really at the forefront of the writing style in this chapter. It starts off easier to read and eventually falls apart into a really chaotic style of narration with hard to follow phrases and little to no sense of the first person narrator we started with. But overall this chapter was definitely easier to read than Benjy's.
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